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Monday, October 27, 2008


OLD
am older by 100 days , am stuck from all the ways
my skin is dry and shedding the flakes
hair is falling , skin is white
day by day am losing my sight
am only 24 and i feel this way
have i learned and experienced before my age ?
or is it the maturity of hopelessness
or am i just scared and want to retire from life

addicted to good times i wander about in search of fun
then i abandon the place and people when am done
i think this is not right like the thousand other things that i have done wrong

to forget all these from memory i sing my song
without any meaning of words just with rhythm and sound
just like my life , without a meaning or reason
all set up and ready for the coming season
dont think about me much .....are you improved ?

2 comments:

Unknown said...

This one is good man.. touching

Loveleen Kaur said...

Great one subho..!!:D:D